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第一篇：電影觀后感英語作文

was almost dead with hunger when he happened to meet a House-dog who was passing by. "Ah, Cousin," said the Dog. "I knew how it would be; your irregular life will soon be the ruin of you. Why do you not work steadily as I do, and get your food regularly given to you?"

"I would have no objection," said the Wolf, "if I could only get a place." "I will easily arrange that for you," said the Dog; "come with me to my master and you shall share my work."

So the Wolf and the Dog went towards the town together. On the way there the Wolf noticed that the hair on a certain part of the Dogs neck was very much worn away, so he asked him how that had come about. "Oh, it is nothing," said the Dog.

"That is only the place where the collar is put on at night to keep me chained up; it chafes a bit, but one soon gets used to it." "Is that all?" said the Wolf. "Then good-bye to you, Master Dog.

" Better starve be a fat slave.The day before yesterday, I saw a film named Ring King It is said the film has won the Oscar award.

Before filming, the director spent seven years planning. There are about one thousand actors and actresses taking part.

The film is about a powerful ring which affects the fate of the beings. In their fight for peace, many people lost their lives.

But in the end, justice defeated the evil.

The film tells us that persistence and courage are the source of success. With persistence and courage, you are sure to win no matter how weak you are. I enjoyed the film very much. Its worth seeing although its

(Dear parents,thank you for your love)

Dear father and mother,

First,thank for your love.l love you,too.You always take care of me.For example,help me with my home work.And when l am ill,you always care for me very well.But sometimes l cannot understand you very well.l always make you very angry.And now,l want to say sorry to you.lt will be mothers birthday soon.So l will prepare a nice present for you.

At last,l want to say,"l love you,my parents."

Sincerely XXX

第二篇：寫作課英語寫作課說課稿

NSEFC BOOK3 新課標必修三 Unit 2 Healthy Eating

From Students’ book P16

Write a short paage to advertise your restaurant and its service.Your writing should:

Explain what kind of food will be offered in your restaurant

Describe their ingredients, flavor, smell and appearance

Explain how they will provide a balanced diet

Explain why your restaurant will provide the best food in the area

Explain how customers will be served

說課稿：

Good afternoon, everyone.I’m so glad to be here to talk about my teaching plan.The teaching plan I ‘m going to talk about is the writing period of Unit2 Healthy Eating taken from NSEFC BOOK3.

I will explain in the following 5 parts:

1.Understanding of the teaching material

2.Analysis of my students

3.Teaching methods and studying ways.

4.Teaching procedure.

5.Blackboard Design

Part 1.Understanding of the teaching material

My Understanding of the teaching material includes 3 parts: the status and function, teaching objectives, teaching important and difficult points.

At the beginning let’s focus on the first part.This unit mainly talks about healthy eating, problems with diet and balanced diet and nutrition.This writing period is about persuasive writing—an advertisement.So this leon plays an important role in this unit---how to use what Ss learnt in this unit to write an advertisement so as to persuade customers.

That’s all for the first part, now let’s move to the second part.According to the teaching material and the new curriculum of English, in order to fulfill the learning task of this leon, I establish the following objectives:

a) Knowledge objectives

By the end of this leon the students will have a better understanding of the structure and characteristics of an advertisement.The students will grasp and can some useful words and expreions to describe a good restaurant such as: fresh, delicious, mouthwatering, home-made food, nutritious, reasonable price … etc

b) Ability objectives

Students will be encouraged to use persuasive sentences.They can make use of the modal verbs which they’ve learnt from last leon: such as should, would, could, will and so on.

Their ability of information gathering, analyzing, comparing and making conclusion will be improved through discuing in groups in pre-writing while the ability of imagination, cohering, creating and persuading will be developed in writing.

c) Moral objectives

I will make full use of this leon to stimulate the students’ learning motivation and make the students confident and improve their ability of cooperating with each other through discuing.

Teaching important and difficult points:

This is a writing cla so the Teaching important and difficult points are how to make use of sentence structures they’ve learnt to write an advertisement of a restaurant and how to improve the Ss’ writing skills.

Part 2.The Analysis of the students:

The students in this grade have known some basic knowledge of advertisement, and they are active in mind.They are able to expre simple ideas in simple English under the teacher’s guidance.And they are more interested in concrete images, so in the proce of teaching, I will make full use of the pictures.

Part 3.Teaching methods and learning ways:

Generally speaking, I will adopt task-based approach, cooperating approach and communicative approach.As for learning, Ss will learn through discuing, information gathering, discuing, comparing and polishing.

Part 4.Teaching Procedure

Here comes the most important part of my teaching plan—my teaching procedure.

It includes 5 steps:

Step1.Revision & lead in.(3M’)

First check the homework of last cla---which was to find out a succeful restaurant advertisement from internet or library.Then let the students swap the homework with each other and discu in groups of 4, take notes, find out and category the impreive sentences into 5 kinds of information:

1.Food (special food, flavor, ingredients, balanced diet etc.)

2.Location

3.Decoration

4.Music

5.Service

6.Price

This step is very important because it can improve the students’ ability to cooperate with each other, prepare them with the information needed and get them interested in the writing proce.

Step2.Discuing (8 M’)

Before they discu in groups of 4, I will show our students 4 pictures of some famous restaurants in Wenzhou-----Shamaohe Sushi Restaurant, Spicy Noodles, Golden Prince Steak House, and Concept Restaurant.Those pictures are placed together with the pictures of their recommended dishes and some key words after (Such as fresh, yummy, nutritious, recommend, specialize, home-made etc.).I will let the students choose one restaurant and suppose they were the owners, then discu how to advertise the recommended food in 3 sentences.

I will ask 3 students to report their work.

In this step, I show them the pictures of their familiar restaurants to stimulate their imagination and attract their interests.

Step 3.Pre-writing (10 M’)

This step includes 2 activities.

Activity one, I will show them the sample advertisement.

Activity two, they will be encouraged to read the advertisement and think over what are the characteristics of a succeful restaurant advertisement.I will encourage some students to analyze and tell me their opinion, so as to improve their ability of analysis, conclusion and imitation.

Then I will give out some suggested points:

Point1.Use the Modal Verb to persuade (Once you’ve tried our food, you will never want to go anywhere else.)

Point2.Use imperative and short sentences to encourage.(come and eat here! Discounts today! )

Point3.Use questions to arouse interest.(Do you want to have home-made flavor food everyday? )

Point 4.Being creative and catchy.(Do you want to date the fresh sea food with your tongue?)

Point 5.It must have a topic sentence.

Step 4.While-writing.(16 M’)

Before they write I will ask students to read the requirements on page 16.

So they will mainly focus on food and service.

I will ask them to write the topic sentence first, and then write at least 6 supporting sentences to advertise the above 4 restaurant motioned.

During their writing I will walk around them and help them with some vocabulary.

Step 5.Post-writing.(6 M’)

After they’ve done the writing, I will let them swap their paage with each other and recommend 3 most succeful advertisements----the most funny, the most impreive, and the most creative ones.

In this step their ability of comparison and evaluation is developed.And their interest of writing is aroused.

Step 6.Homework.(2 M’)

1.Polish their writing and write some more aspects of their restaurants, such as music, decoration, location, etc.Their final work will be modified and selected, then the most succeful ones will be put up on the English Corner.

2.Review the words and expreions in this unit, and we will have a dictation.

This step plays an important role in improving their writing skills and autonomous learning ability.

The following is my blackboard design:

5 kinds of information could be advertised:

1.Food (special food, flavor, ingredients, balanced diet etc.)

2.Location

3.Decoration

4.Music

5.Service

6.Price

5 Stylish Characteristics of a succeful advertisement

Point1.Use the Modal Verb to persuade (Once you’ve tried our food, you will never want to go anywhere else.)

Point2.Use imperative and short sentences to encourage.(come and eat here! Discounts today! )

Point3.Use questions to arouse interest.(Do you want to have home-made flavor food everyday? )

Point 4.Being creative and catchy.(Do you want to date the fresh sea food with your tongue?)

Point 5.It must have a topic sentence.

第三篇：高中英語寫作課教案詳細步驟

一、

1、Good morning, cla.What is the weather like today? Yes, it is sunshine.Today we are going to learn how to write a good compositon.Let’s begin with this topic(寫板書：what is your winter holiday plan?)

Winter holiday is approaching.Pretend that you and your clamates are talking about what to do during the holiday.And finally you have two choices, one is to stay at home, another is to take a trip.Now dicu in groups, talk about the advantages and disadvantages of the two choices and decide which one is the best choice.Let’s begin.

Times up.Group 1, who can tell me the opinions of your group? Ok, zhangying.Your choice is, (板書：stay at home: the advantages are: le expensive and confortable; the disadvantages are: can not know more about the outside world personally) .thank you, sit down please.

Group 2 ?who can tell? Lixin.Your group’s choice is (板書：take a trip: advantages: enlarge your vision / broaden your horizons, and enrich your knowledge.Disadvantages: expensive, inconvenient ) .Thank you, sit donw please.

Group 3 stay at home: have time to study.And help parents with housework.

Group 4 take a trip: to have an unforgetatble experice.

2、Now cla, let’s look at the blackboard.We have got these ideas about staying at home or taking a trip during the winter holiday.I think everyone has his own opinion.Now can you write down your choice and your opinion in your composition?

First, we should aware that, when writing an argumentative composition, how many paragraphs should it has? Yes.At least 3 paragraphs.The first part to lead out the topic(引出論點), the second part to argue and demonstrate or describe the argument（提出論點、論證/描述論點）.The third part give a summary (總結(jié)全文) . And when writing, we can start like this (板書：When it comes to…, I think…

Tbere is a debate today that…

) .And the second part, we can use some sentences like these: (板書：some people think that…, on the other hand,…

for one thing…, for another…

the first and most important reason is that…

firstly…, secondly…, thirdly…

) And the third part, we can use (板書：from my point of view, I think…

as for myself/my part, I would like to …

my answer is …

I cant agreee more with …) Ok.It is your time to write the composition.I will give you 20 minutes.

3、Who finished? Hands up.Ok ,Zhanghuanyue, can you read your work to us?

Thanks .you did a good job.Cla, did you find any mistakes in her composition? Yes, pay attention to the sense of time.Anyway , it is still a good work.

二、Cla, the homework of today is another compositon .Nowadays, more and more literary works have been adapted into movies.Some people choose to watch movies, while others prefer the originals.Please try to write an English eay in the title of “Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer?” ,according to the following points:

1、watch movies： save time, funny, easy to understand

2、reading original works: more details, beautiful language

3、my opinion and reasons.120~150words.Feference words: 原著-- original work / book in the original/ the original 1

第四篇：高中英語寫作課教案

Book6 Module3 Interpersonal relationship—— Friendship

高中英語寫作課教案

Teaching Aims 1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.Teaching Procedures Step 1 Discuion Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy’s pocket.Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says ‘yes’, someone says ‘no’.If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn’t steal the money, what should I do?

Discu it in groups of four .

Collect answers from students.Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same.Because we’re friends.Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.

In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends.And what do you think of a friend or friendship? How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.Suggested answers: Good qualities:

outgoing hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature

Bad qualities:

dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy carele peimistic Brainstorming: Step 2 Writing Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends. Suggested expreions: close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest, 一些有關(guān)友誼的名言警句如： On friends and friendship: A true friend is one soul in two bodies.(---Aristotle) A friend in need is a friend indeed.(---Ray) Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin) A friend is a present which you give yourself.(---Robert Louis Stevenson) Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends.(---Abbe Jacques Deille) A faithful friend is the medicine of life.(---William Shakespeare) The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake) We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment.(---Alfred Capus) Friendship is love without his wings.(---George Gordon Byron) True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington) Sample: Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life.I have a good friend.Sometimes I argue with my friend.For example, once we discued a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot.However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once.No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don’t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time.When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way.When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.

So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious.Getting along with friends is just like growing plants.We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger.And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends.Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.

Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get .Remember, the key is your sincere heart.Step 3 Promotion and Homework 1) Aign another writing task based on the following information: What do you think of a friend or friendship? How to keep friendship? 2） Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.3) Let the students hand in their final copies.4) Select some good samples to read to the whole cla. Suggested sample: Friendship is the most important things in life.Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles.Real good friends could put each other in their hearts.Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently.Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree.You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow.Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base.Maybe fight also will happen.How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other.Try your best to keep friendship forever.It is neceary to tell the truth and respect each other.

教學(xué)實施過程：

針對學(xué)生這樣的實際情況，并受任務(wù)型教學(xué)法啟示“任務(wù)型教學(xué)理論實際上就是建立在討論或交流教學(xué)思路的基礎(chǔ)上的,是交流教學(xué)思路的一種發(fā)展形態(tài),英語教學(xué)要以學(xué)生為中心,教師要為學(xué)生設(shè)計運用語言的環(huán)境,通過大量的交流活動總結(jié)和掌握語言的規(guī)律,并在交流活動中實踐,從而達到目的.”我對每模塊后的書面表達內(nèi)容的教學(xué)作了調(diào)整，這樣處理：即把寫作課變成討論和寫作并存的活動課，并在活動課中備有相關(guān)的多媒體內(nèi)容或音樂，使學(xué)生在真切愉快的情景中搜集寫作素材，完成寫作內(nèi)容，最后達到激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作興趣，提高寫作技能并促進其他幾種技能的效果。具體教學(xué)過程如下：

第一步，確定題目后，教師啟發(fā)學(xué)生思考，回憶寫作中所需要的相關(guān)詞匯，必要時通過多媒體展示相關(guān)內(nèi)容，然后教師在黑板上進行總結(jié)或借助多媒體把關(guān)鍵詞語呈現(xiàn)給學(xué)生.例如外研版教材Book6 Module3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,該模塊的寫作任務(wù)講述朋友之間所產(chǎn)生的矛盾問題，并提出建議如何保持友誼：Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教師可先展示一些有關(guān)友誼或本班同學(xué)相處的圖片、幻燈片、音樂等,以激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣。然后教師可引導(dǎo)學(xué)生說說自己的好朋友，盡可能用到本模塊所學(xué)過的詞匯：close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。

第二步，分組討論（均勻分配不同程度的學(xué)生），要求學(xué)生圍繞寫作話題借助有關(guān)詞匯，人人動口，積極思維:1.Who is your good friend? 2.How do you become good friends? 3.Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What’s the problem? 5.Have you made up? 6.What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 并讓學(xué)生各抒己見,提供出不同的詞語句型，如1.I’ve known him/her for ...2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common.4.I not only...but also...5.I suggest that...6.Why not...? 7.Can’t we ...? 8.What about...? 9.Friendship is both...and...10.If we..., we can...等也可提供一些有關(guān)友誼的名言警句如：On friends and friendship: A true friend is one soul in two bodies.(---Aristotle) A friend in need is a friend indeed.(---Ray) Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin) A friend is a present which you give yourself.(---Robert Louis Stevenson) Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends.(---Abbe Jacques Deille) A faithful friend is the medicine of life.(---William Shakespeare) The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake) We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment.(---Alfred Capus) Friendship is love without his wings.(---George Gordon Byron) True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington) 同時教師提醒學(xué)生在討論中盡量使用正確的時態(tài)、語態(tài)并用英語交流。這一步也是學(xué)生英文寫作收集寫作素材的過程。教師可參考與到各個組中，幫助學(xué)生解決疑難問題，并根據(jù)不同的寫作內(nèi)容和各小組的實際水平適當給他們提供一些新的詞匯，同時鼓勵那些平時不善于言談的學(xué)生開口交流和幫助基礎(chǔ)較差的學(xué)生。通過不斷的教學(xué)實踐，我發(fā)現(xiàn)：在這種活動或情景之下，學(xué)生無拘無束，大膽熱烈討論，加之教師的指導(dǎo)，寫作的素材自然獲得不少。最后每組選一位代表執(zhí)筆完成書面表達，并在時間允許內(nèi)在全班朗讀；

第三步，教師進行總結(jié)歸納： Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement.With succe achieved, we also need friends to share our joys..Long live friendship! 同時再次強調(diào)寫作中所需的時態(tài)、語態(tài)和學(xué)生寫作過程中容易犯的錯誤等關(guān)鍵問題。而后要求學(xué)生課后完成各自的寫作內(nèi)容并上交作業(yè)。

第四步，作文評價是個意義重大的環(huán)節(jié)，可采用以下評價機制，包括學(xué)生自評→學(xué)生互評→教師評價→全班反饋→范文共賞五個環(huán)節(jié)。

學(xué)生參與情況：

運用這種教學(xué)方式，我所教的班級學(xué)生普遍反映：這種討論和寫作的方式更適合他們，因為氣氛活躍，讓人覺得輕松，通過小組的討論、互相幫助和老師的指引，較容易搜集到寫作素材,而且參考小組素材再結(jié)合自己的觀點，就更容易下手寫作了。每個小組都能寫出較為優(yōu)秀的文章，而且，學(xué)生完成作業(yè)情況非常好，能充分運用課上所講的相關(guān)詞匯和表達方式，有些同學(xué)的文章寫得相當好，可以作為范文展示學(xué)習(xí)?？偠灾?，這種寫作教學(xué)法既激發(fā)了學(xué)生的寫作興趣，又提高了他們的口語表達能力，同時還培養(yǎng)了他們的群體合作精神，而且也達到了師生互動交流。

第五篇：《寫作課》教案

《寫作課》教案

—— 一件難忘的事

教師：王萱

一、教學(xué)目標：

1、了解作文體裁；

2、了解寫事類記敘文的寫作方法；

3、了解如何將事件寫得精彩、詳細。

二、教學(xué)重點：

1、了解寫事類記敘文的寫作方法；

2、了解如何將事件寫得精彩、詳細。

三、教學(xué)難點：

? 了解如何將事件寫得精彩、詳細。

四、教學(xué)設(shè)計：

1、情景設(shè)置法

2、提問、點撥法

3、小組討論法

五、教學(xué)過程：

1、導(dǎo)課：

同學(xué)們都知道，在我們?nèi)粘ＵZ文中，作文是最最讓大家頭疼的一件事。每每要寫作文，我想同學(xué)們肯定都想著，煩死了，又寫作文；作文什么的最討厭。要不，有的同學(xué)甚至想，要是沒有作文該多好。

今天呢，老師就給同學(xué)們教會一個秘密武器，只要你們能認真學(xué)習(xí)這個，什么作文的，一定不是難題！

2、教學(xué)內(nèi)容： ⑴了解文章體裁

首先，要把作文寫好，就要明白一個問題，同學(xué)們知道，我們的作文有哪些體裁嘛？（記敘文、議論文、說明文、應(yīng)用文）

而在我們小學(xué)階段，主要是記敘文和說明文。在考試中，則絕大多數(shù)考的是記敘文，記敘文還分為寫人記敘文和寫事記敘文。今天，老師就給你們著重講一下寫事記敘文的寫法。

⑵了解寫事類記敘文的寫作方法

首先，我們同學(xué)誰知道記敘文的六要素？（時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果。這也叫記敘文四要素。）

其次，我們說，文章一般分為開頭，中間，結(jié)尾。

①開頭：A開門見山法：文章第一自然段就介紹時間的時間、地點、人物、起因。（一般少用）

B引用法：引用詩歌、名人名言、歌曲、俗語等。

C議論法：圍繞主題議論。比如一件難忘的事。在我們?nèi)松拈L河中，有許許多多的事情發(fā)生，這些事情，像一顆顆閃爍的寶石，留在我的記憶里。有的事情，讓我感動，有的事情，讓我高興，有的事情， 讓我傷心。而有一件事情，讓我久久不能忘懷。

②中間：分段描寫事件的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果。

③結(jié)尾：圍繞主題寫出通過這件事給你的啟示。通過這件事，我明白了________。我也希望同學(xué)們和我一樣，_________。

⑶了解如何將事件寫得精彩、詳細。

了解了記敘文的寫作方法，那么我們來講解一下，如何把文章寫得精彩、詳細。

首先，我們先分析題目，一件難忘的事。通過題目，我們知道，你描寫的事情，一定是要難忘，給你留下深刻印象的。那么，什么叫做難忘？就是，通過這件事，讓你明白一個道理。比如：堅持就是勝利，要誠實，要自信，要勇敢，要珍惜時間，要有信念……那么，你就要在這些中，選擇一個主題。你在文章中寫的事件，舉得名人名言，引用的詩歌都要圍繞主題。

其次，確定了主題，我們就要去寫事件。那么一個事件，包括了時間，地點，人物，起因，經(jīng)過，結(jié)果。而每一個事件，都是人物去做的，那么，我們就要知道，人物描寫有哪些方法？（外貌、語言、動作、神態(tài)、心理）我們就那爬山，堅持就是勝利來做例子。

① 先說，時間，地點，人物，事件。那是 時候

誰 爬山時發(fā)生的。這里的事件，就是直接說是什么事。

爬山，先寫自己之間知道這個消息的心情，自己的準備，迫不及待地等待那天到來。然后，到了那天，你什么心情，一家人一起去什么地方爬山。

② 到了山腳下，你看到的環(huán)境，山，樹，花，水。看到山頂，你下決心，迫不及待要爬。

③ 詳細描寫爬山，剛開始，你是什么心情，飛快的，等等描寫爬山，接著，爬一會是不是累了，你的心理，外貌（臉紅紅的，氣喘吁吁……）看到什么，堅持去爬，又爬了一會，是不是更累了，這時，你的心理，外貌，動作，語言。這是，誰對你說了什么，聽了這話，（要和堅持就是勝利有關(guān)）你的心理變化，你怎么做的。如何堅持去爬。

④ 最后，你爬到山頂，看到美景，心理。

4、教師總結(jié)：

通過本節(jié)課，老師相信，同學(xué)們對一片寫事類記敘文應(yīng)該比較了解了，接下來，只要同學(xué)們勤加練習(xí)，一定會有很大的進步的。

5、板書設(shè)計：

一件難忘的事

一、開頭：①開門見山

②引用法

③議論法：在我們?nèi)松拈L河中，有許許多多的事情發(fā)生，

這些事情，像一顆顆閃爍的寶石，留在我的記憶里。有的事情，讓我感動，有的事情，讓我高興，有的事情， 讓我傷心。而有一件事情，讓我久久不能忘懷。

二、中間：①先說，時間，地點，人物，事件。那是 時候

誰 爬山

時發(fā)生的。這里的事件，就是直接說是什么事。 爬山，先寫自己之間知道這個消息的心情，自己的準備，迫不及待地等待那天到來。然后，到了那天，你什么心情，一家人一起去什么地方爬山。

②到了山腳下，你看到的環(huán)境，山，樹，花，水。看到山

頂，你下決心，迫不及待要爬。

③詳細描寫爬山，剛開始，你是什么心情，飛快的，等等

描寫爬山，接著，爬一會是不是累了，你的心理，外貌（臉紅紅的，氣喘吁吁……）看到什么，堅持去爬，又爬了一會，是不是更累了，這時，你的心理，外貌，動作，語言。這是，誰對你說了什么，聽了這話，（要和堅持就是勝利有關(guān)）你的心理變化，你怎么做的。如何堅持去爬。

④最后，你爬到山頂，看到美景，心理。

三、結(jié)尾：通過這件事，我明白了________。我也希望同學(xué)們和我一

樣，_________。

《寫作課》教案

班級：五年級 科目：語文

教師姓名：王萱

第六篇：英語寫作教案

How to Get a Higher mark in Writing

Teaching Goals: Help students to know how to get a higher mark in the exams.Teaching Important Points: Get students to know what makes a good composition and how to leave a good impreion on teachers in writing.Teaching Procedures: Step 1: Lead in.Step 2: Show students a full-mark composition in the College Entrance Examination to enjoy the beautiful handwriting and good sentences.

Get students to know about what makes a good composition: 1.All the important points are included 2.Beautiful language: beautiful expreions, advanced structures 3.Few mistakes 4.Well-connected, smooth, logical, tight, economical Get students to know about how to leave a good impreion on teachers in writing: 1.Keep your answer sheet clean and tidy 2.The important points should be attractive and usually in the given order 3.Pay special attention to the first three sentences and the ending.Step 3: Get students to write the composition on their test papers.書面表達（共35分） 假設(shè)你是李華，到陽光酒店去找Mr.Smith并通知他明天上午8點鐘到會議中心去聽演講，主講人是來自四川大學(xué)的王教授，講座的內(nèi)容是有關(guān)污染的問題。但是Mr.Smith不在，于是你給他留言，并詳細告訴他怎樣去會議中心：會議中心離酒店不遠，可以步行，出酒店，然后向左轉(zhuǎn)；往前走，走到一個十字路口處向右轉(zhuǎn)；一直往前走，然后到達另一個十字路口；在十字路口的左邊，街道的拐角處有一郵局；會議中心就在郵局的旁邊。根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫出留言條，要求：文章內(nèi)容連貫， 100詞左右。 1.Analyze the directions.(審題）

Title，Tense and voice，Person，Style，Paragraph，The important points: 2.List the important points out.(列出要點) Why do you leave a meage?

What do you want to tell Mr.Smith? ①When?②Where?③Who?④What? 3.Translate （遣詞，造句） ①我去陽光賓館通知你去聽演講，但你不在,于是我留下口信 ②演講時間：明天上午8點 ③演講地點：會議中心 ④主講人是來自四川大學(xué)的王教授 ⑤講座的內(nèi)容：污染問題

4.Write a paragraph. (潤色，謀篇）

①.There will be a speech at 8 tomorrow morning.It will be given in the Conference Centre.The speaker will be Profeor Wang.He is from Sichuan University.It is about the problem of pollution.Is this paragraph well-connected? Economical? ②.There will be a speech which is about the problem of pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00 tomorrow morning.It will be given by Profeor Wang, who is from Sichuan University.

(Better) ③.Profeor Wang, who is from Sichuan University, will talk about pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00 tomorrow morning.(Much better) ④.There will be a speech on the problem of pollution in the Conference Centre at 8:00am tomorrow, which will be given by Profeor Wang from Sichuan University. (The best) Show the way in English 指路用語： ①.沿著此路走。Go (straight) down this road/street.Walk along this road/street.②.在第一個/第二個十字路口向左/右轉(zhuǎn)。Turn left/right at the first/second croroads.Take a left/right turn…..③.坐三路車，在第三站下車。Take Bus No.3 and get off at the third stop.④.然后你就到了。Then you’ll find/come to it./You won’t mi it.5.Writing a paragraph (潤色，謀篇) Go out of the hotel and turn left.And you will come to a croroads and turn right.Walk along the road and you will see another croroads.On the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street.Walk along the street and you will find the Conference Centre.Is it tight enough?

Now let’s make it tight.

When you go out of the hotel, turn left.Walk straight down the street until you come to a croroads.Take a right turn there.Keep on walking till you see another croroads.And then on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street.The Conference Centre is next to it.But is it logical enough?

Let’s make it logical.

The Conference Centre is not far from your hotel, and therefore, you may walk there.First, when you go out of the hotel, turn left.Second, walk straight down the street until you come to a croroads.Take a right turn there.Third, keep on walking till you see another croroads.Finally, on the left you will see a post office at the corner of the street, and the Conference Centre is next to it.You won’t mi it.

Step 4: Get students to enjoy a composition with beautiful sentences and phrases.Step 5: Tips.

Ⅰ.Try some advanced structures Ⅱ.十大經(jīng)典句型 Ⅲ.恰當使用過渡性詞語